I think your poem ws cool but I don't agree your comment. Trees don't protect us from choas. They just provide oxygen! If we plant lots of trees in an area and build a jungle, it still wont stop chaos.
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deniz
1/19/2011 03:44:00 am
I don't think that the poem is too short.but I agree with yellow. I don't think that trees will avoid chaos. They are just plants they can't stop people from hurting each other.
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